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"in a world" does not work i think... the feeling is not whole... but the rest of the poem is good...
You're right Kush. I was thinking of 'in this world' but it didn't work for me. I want to use world.
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ReplyDelete"in a world" does not work i think... the feeling is not whole... but the rest of the poem is good...
ReplyDeleteYou're right Kush. I was thinking of 'in this world' but it didn't work for me. I want to use world.
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